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Old 06-09-2008, 01:13 AM     #3 (permalink)
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Re: The Importance Of "Correct Punctuation"

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Originally Posted by ProF View Post
VERSION 1

Dear John:
I want a man who knows what love is all about. You are generous, kind,
thoughtful. People who are not like you admit to being useless and
inferior. You have ruined me for other men. I yearn for you. I have no
feelings whatsoever when we're apart. I can be forever happy--will you
let me be yours?
Gloria

VERSION 2

Dear John:
I want a man who knows what love is. All about you are generous, kind,
thoughtful people, who are not like you. Admit to being useless and
inferior. You have ruined me. For other men, I yearn. For you, I have
no feelings whatsoever. When we're apart, I can be forever happy. Will
you let me be?

Yours,
Gloria
AHA!!!AN ERUDITE H-D RIDER.
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